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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697
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Well, I saw the guy I love with his girlfriend tonight, so I wrote this to express what I feel. It isn't very good, sorry. It was written with raw emotion I see those deep blue eyes And wish that they could see The love that I have for you I wish they would see me But I guess you are blinded To the love I have for you You will feel the pain I have You’ll never know what I go through Maybe I’m not good enough What can I do To make myself good enough And deserving of you? Who am I to think That I deserve your love I’m not at your level You are far above I don’t have the beauty you deserve Neither outside or in I could try to change this But how would I begin? I hope this girl has what you deserve I hope that you are in bliss I would never interfere with anything That gave you happiness I wish I had whatever she has That makes her deserve you Whatever makes him look at her With those beautiful eyes of blue But, if somehow she is undeserving And fate turns its twisted way I just have one hope and wish-- That someone will deserve you someday ~LadyBug~ |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ohhh.... I know how you feel. I wrote on a topic very simliar. You should read it. It's called "Hidden Feelings". I wish you the best of luck on your situation. If you want to talk e-mail me. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How about this one, Lovebug? Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Wow, Elizabeth is bring up all the old one's. I guess thats what mentors do. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Jer, read my plea in Open to see why all these oldies are being reborn!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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