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Lost In Thought |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA 
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The light breeze whipping a strand of her hair... Clouded sunshine sprinkled with warming caresses... The familiar scent of newly shaven grass in the air... A slight humming somewhere... Half-closed eyes, encompassed in calmness... Drifting slowly, feeling the sway... She’s lost in that splendor moment of time... I'm wallowing in thoughts of you... |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Very nice, Jer! JOY |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
How very lovely. Nicely done! ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Enjoyed this one Jer. Nice work.  |
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Leigh Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 20 |
that was great Jer! Keep posting so I can read more! |
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