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Teen Poetry #2

Hard as rock am I

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-12-29 11:17 PM

Hard as rock am I
Known not to the human eye
Inside I melt like butter
Known not, or it would make them shudder
Hard as rock on the outside
The rain propells down
Trying to get in
The rain finaly stops
It thinks it can't seep in... but...
It does
But hard as rock am I
Known not to the human eye

JOY

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

1 posted 1999-12-29 11:21 PM

Very good. Simple, to the point, and lovely.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

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