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Some are better off without me
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Some are better off without me |
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Karisma Abrille New Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1 |
I could give them a smile I could give them a frown I can I love you And let my heart drown I can say things aren't meant to be I can say that you don't love me I gave them my all I did my best from what I recall We used to share laughs, and tears We helped each other get over our fears I would swim the seven seas I would hear you name in a breeze I could try to fit in Even though I was thick, and you were thin The pain of an accident can't compare To the way you hurt me, was it a dare? You weren't the type, to just sit across me and stare You always told me we had something there But I knew you didn't care And everything I said dissappeared into thin air Some people are better off without me Because I am better off without them People can manipulate all they want But they can't get to me I have something inside of me That you and them can't see And now that your gone Inside I know I'm free!! Don't get all sad on me And say I was the one being mean Because when judgement day comes You'll wake up from your dream Some people are better off without me Becasue they do not need me I am better off without them Because we are seperated by great seas I could let out a laugh I could even start to cry But no matter what they think Iam me not you... But I |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely. This poem brings back bittersweet memories of a situation much like that. Very beautiful. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. I am afraid there are many people in this world that are out to get what they can, they do not consider the cost. I am sorry this happened to you.  |
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mahi_mahi New Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 5 |
what you have said in this poem is so true i know that feeling from first hand experience you are a good poet keep up the good work [This message has been edited by mahi_mahi (edited 12-29-1999).] |
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