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Would you forgive me too...replies please...
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Kiwi Junior Member
since 1999-12-24
Posts 10 |
You told me... You told me that you would never hurt me That we would always be friends But ten minutes later you turn around and hurt me I guess your **** never ends You said you have been nothing but nice to me that our friendship would never end But ten minutes later you turn around and you are mean to me I guess this is where it ends I don't want it to end We have bee through too much I always want to be near you To feel your loving touch But I guess it is too late for that we both said some pretty harsh things we faught too hard.. too long You treated me like a queen And I treated you like a king we both were very mean We lost our friendship over one stupid thing I guess this is reality If only I could tell you Tell you that I am sorry Would you forgive me too? |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I would forgive you, kiwi, but i guess you wouldnt really care much  This is a great poem about what happens to a relationship afterawhile, and it's very true to life! i like it kiwi, please post more for us to enjoy!!Ashley |
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