People Tell Me..(please comment)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #2

People Tell Me..(please comment)

Kiwi
Junior Member

since 1999-12-24

Posts 10

0 posted 1999-12-25 05:09 PM

Please give me any comments that you can about this Poem...

People Tell Me

People Always tell me to never have regrets
But what is that suppose to mean
To hurt you friends and not care
to do something that you knew you shouldn't have and not think anything of it
or just to not even care about things that you have done in the past?

People always tell me to live by the moment
But what is that suppose to mean?
To not think before you act?
to do something if you think it is right?
or just to do things out of pure inspiration?

People always tell me to do things if I think it is right
But what is that suppose to mean?
To hurt my friend if I think it is right?
To blurt soemthing out only if I think it is right?
or to go someplace and do something if I think it is right and no one else does??

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-12-26 09:29 PM

You've given me some things to think about, Kiwi. Exellent work, keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

2 posted 1999-12-27 11:56 PM

yes, i'm left thinking too...great job!!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.