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Teen Poetry #2

Sometimes Sorrow Brings

jesi82
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since 1999-12-13

Posts 6

0 posted 1999-12-14 11:33 PM

sometimes sorrow brings

it’s not always you
it’s not always me
sometimes it’s just things
that one miss of a phone call
that one miss of a friend
that sometimes sorrow brings
its not always you
it's not always me
sometimes it’s just the little things
like the miss of a smile
or the miss of a laugh
that sometimes sorrow brings
its not always you
it's not always me
sometimes it’s a lot of things
like the death of a cousin
or is my dad proud
that sometimes sorrow brings
its not ever you
it's not ever me
when it's all those stupid little things
like a little bit a jealousy
or the missing of your touch, kiss, and laugh
that sometimes sorrow brings
so know its not ever you
and it's mostly me
when I worry about the minutest things
that sometimes sorrow brings….

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-12-15 09:52 AM

I like this very much! I think you'll find that if you space your posts out instead of posting several poems in a row, you will get more responses! I look forward to reading more from you!

Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

2 posted 1999-12-15 10:25 PM

I really like this poem. You do a good job.I hope to see more.

Isa =)

Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

3 posted 1999-12-15 10:28 PM

i love the flow....

Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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SeaDragon
Junior Member

since 1999-12-11

Posts 11

4 posted 1999-12-16 02:17 AM

I hear you. Is this the way things are supposed to be?

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-12-16 10:51 PM

Boy do I understand this....great work, I hope to see more!

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

starboards
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since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

6 posted 1999-12-17 11:34 AM

I like the fact that you expressed many emotions all in one poem...and it's true, sorrow can be brought on by just little things! great job...hope to be readin more from you!!!

Starboards

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