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since 1999-10-03
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Hyde Park, Ut, USA

0 posted 1999-10-10 02:54 AM

It is said that words pour onto a page from a liquid mind when expression is fulfilled.
Words are found as we sort through our souls of confusion and untangle our emotions.
You have to be able to describe whatever is on your mind and still live to write it.
If it makes you cry, then express your tears dispelled.
If it causes you grief, then show me how your life is sliding down a slick, endless slope.
If it brings to mind sad memories then reveal them to me.
If you're clinging onto everyday, then exemplify that in every way.
Glimpse at your self within and turn you mind inside out.
Comprehend all that is accomplished.
Show me and teach me of yourself through your standard of living.
Let me grasp your thoughts in my finger tips.
Express everything inside of you...
and gather together...
A Poem.


© Copyright 1999 kari - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-02 07:41 PM

This is SO beautiful!
Thankyou for writing it.
as someone who thinks he can
write a little bit I know anyone
like me who even trys to write can relate
to this and thatis all we are gaining to do
express our selves and hope someone
will understand.         

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2 posted 2000-03-02 07:52 PM

This is a beautiful poem! You describe the thoughts of the poet very well! Keep up the good work!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

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