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Teen Poetry #2

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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-02-29 04:37 PM

Just one picture left,
On an otherwise empty roll.
He and I together,
In each other’s arms,
Was the last picture taken.

I really didn’t notice,
The love in our eyes.
Just one picture left,
I'm saving it for him.

So this time I’ll know,
The love in our eyes.
We looked so cozy,
When we held each other.

Just one picture left,
Oh, how I love him so.
His arms wrapped around me,
He holds me so close.

He knows I'm saving,
The one picture left,
Until the next time,
I'm in his arms again.

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-29-2000).]

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

1 posted 2000-03-01 12:45 PM

I can hear the desire provoked in your words of poetry here. May he come soon and then you can invest in Kodak

There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-01 10:34 AM

This is a nice poem. You have a writers imagination and structure your poetry very well I think. I try to read all your poetry because I feel you have a special talent for writing.
Look forward to more.
Got your e-mail, reply on the way.

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

3 posted 2000-03-01 06:49 PM

tamma: i like this one a lot... very sweet

one of your best, i'd say... keep up the excellent work... and i hope you get to take that final picture soon

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

And their bleating was like a wet salmon
slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap!

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

4 posted 2000-03-02 07:43 PM

thank you for your comments

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-03-2000).]

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