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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Just one picture left, On an otherwise empty roll. He and I together, In each other’s arms, Was the last picture taken. I really didn’t notice, The love in our eyes. Just one picture left, I'm saving it for him. So this time I’ll know, The love in our eyes. We looked so cozy, When we held each other. Just one picture left, Oh, how I love him so. His arms wrapped around me, He holds me so close. He knows I'm saving, The one picture left, Until the next time, I'm in his arms again. (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I can hear the desire provoked in your words of poetry here. May he come soon and then you can invest in Kodak  There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is a nice poem. You have a writers imagination and structure your poetry very well I think. I try to read all your poetry because I feel you have a special talent for writing. Look forward to more. Got your e-mail, reply on the way. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
tamma: i like this one a lot... very sweet one of your best, i'd say... keep up the excellent work... and i hope you get to take that final picture soon  sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest And their bleating was like a wet salmon slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap! |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
thank you for your comments [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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