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Teen Poetry #2

Thoughts Of You

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-12-05 10:17 PM

I sense your breath
Floating across my skin
Your thoughts
Blanketing me
Like warming firelight
Melting the ice
That once formed
Within my tragic heart....

I sink within the depths
Of your softened eyes
No poet's word describes
The sheer emotion
Flowing from within me
For the first time
I am whole
Because of only you....

Tears wash over me
The tender droplets so vivid
Melting away with your kiss
My dreams now reality
As I feel your love
Consuming me
And I somehow know
That forever is ours....

My love blossoms
With the passing of time
Every minute
It becomes stronger
Unbreakable
Whenever I need you
You are here
As I shall be for you.

*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~

Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

1 posted 1999-12-05 10:36 PM

Wow,what can I say, I love it. Although, I love everything you write. You have so much talent. This is the best poem I have read in a long time. Thanks for sharing it

Dusk Treader

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since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

2 posted 1999-12-05 11:02 PM

Great poem Krista! Much enjoyed, so very lovely. I'd bet a lot on the fact it's true to life, and I'm so very happy for ya!

LOL, I have to worry a little with your latest slogan though...

"Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"

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