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Teen Poetry #2

Our Last Dance Together

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-11-28 03:29 PM

You search for just the right song.
A lovers song
You look into my eyes and smile that smile
You gently take my hand in yours and ask,
"May I have this dance."
I smile at your gentlemen ways,
As we dance in a swift rythum
Our hearts pounding for each other
You pull me close
And I rest my head on you shoulder
I feel so safe and comforted in your arms.
I gaze into your dark brown eyes.
I forget where I am,
but your sweet voice brings me back to reality
You softly whisper,
"This is how it should always be."
That's when I knew you did care for me,
I knew my life would never be the same.
As the song ends,
for what seems like eternity,
you hold me close,
No words need to be spoke,
our love speaks out loud.
Nothing could ruin this perfect moment.
But if I only knew,
a couple weeks later
you'd be gone
and this would be
Our Last Dance Together.

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©Misty
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pop_tart14
Junior Member

since 1999-11-22

Posts 12
North Dakota, USA

1 posted 1999-11-28 07:33 PM

ohhhhhhh. this is a sad poem. but i like it. even though it's pretty depressing. thanks for sharing it though!

*amanda*

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

2 posted 1999-12-05 12:39 PM

What's really depressing is it really happend just as the poem says! your welcome

Innocent_Bystander
Junior Member

since 1999-12-05

Posts 15

3 posted 1999-12-05 03:29 AM

<B>Well Misty this is well written, and I hope you see him again.....Nice poem!

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Any man can make a baby, But only a real man can take care of his children. ~Unknown~

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-12-05 10:57 PM

This is very sad....exquisitely written though. Exellent, Misty!

*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~

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