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I saw you tonight =(
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I saw you tonight =( |
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Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
I'd told myself I was over you then i saw you tonight I told myself i had forgotten about you then i saw you tonight I looked at you and all the feelings were back when i saw you tonight You were with another girl i saw you tonight do you know how much that hurt? when i saw you tonight I saw you tonight and i know that you saw me |
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Aquarius New Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 6Norton,Ma. USA |
Sweet and to the point. I like this. I know this scenario all to well. It does hurt. I like the playful jab at the end. "And I know that you saw me." Good one!  |
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Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
thankyou very much =) yeh that poem is not my usual style..but I when i write it i had just come back from a party where id seen him..so it was coming straight outta my head..or should i say my heart.. thanks heaps but! |
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Tal Junior Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 27Singapore |
Oh God, how uncanny... something like this happened to me yesterday... unfortunately, I was about to write about it.. but I think the postion has been taken by you.. I really like this poem though, uncannily, it's almost exactly what I'm feeling... |
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