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Tal Junior Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 27Singapore |
I spoke to God alone last night And told eveything I knew We talked until the dawn's first light And then He left with morning dew I told Him of my hopeless love For someone who could not love me He said He'd seen it from above And told me to set her free He told me He'd given me a chance To know that love could mean I knew he spoke of my one romance That before the time I'd never seen I tried my case before Him I gave him every explanation But my hopes began to dim And despair replace elation He reachhed inside and in His grasp Let my heart know the truth That my love did not last Because of foolishness of youth I cried then, such painfilled tears And felt a warmth against my face He told me that to remember throughout the years He collected sorrow in a special place We spoke of many things that time I poured my heart and soul And one thing that was on my mind Was that He return the heart you stole But I didn't and I think I know why And as He left I think He knew too So when He went I said goodbye And asked Him to take care of you. Well... this one came about because I'd just broken up with my first and only girlfriend. That was because, the fool that I am, I saw the girl I fell in love in with 2 years ago and BAM.. fell for her again.. She was on my mind all the time, even when I was with my girlfriend. So I thought to be fair to her, I had to break up with her. She didn't take it too badly.. she has another boyfriend right now.. and me? I'm still clinging on to the hope that one day the girl I fell in love with 2 years aggo and still love today will realise that I love her... Um.. |
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Taeira Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26 |
um ..ok whoa! sound slike my life! i thought i liekd somone and turned out he liked me...thinsg were going ok then my ex that i hadnt seen for a year told one of my frenz he was gonna email me and yeh..i fully forgot about the new guy! my ex lives on the other side of the world but i still give up people for him  |
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Aquarius New Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 6Norton,Ma. USA |
This is such a beautiful poem. It is sad also, but oh! the feelings I got from this. You expressed yourself fairly well. I did have to read it a second time, for I didn't catch the fact that you were directing this to the girl you lost. (the first girl)? I guess I like this even more because you involve God in your life. You're a very smart man just for that. And I think we've ALL screwed up what we thought was and would've been the 'perfect' relationship. Things happen for a reason. Both of your occurances could've happened for a reason. I wish you the best of luck, my friend! Have you received any info. that would let you know if your lost love is still interested? You opened up the book for us, now I want to know the rest of the story!  Keep us posted. Put it into poetry!!! |
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Tal Junior Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 27Singapore |
Well, thank you for your comments.. um.. well actually things have taken a new sick twist.. I want to die.. jeez... but, I do have some new poems, but right now I don't have the time to post em... thanks again! |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
ok I like totally loved this poem.. i promise you, you have got talent that you need to keep alive... and about this death thing.. dont do it.. it aint worth it.. i tried it.. i failed.. and i caused pain.. and i wondered if i had succeeded how much of that pain would have been magnified onto everyone else in my life... so i say to everyone who thinks about trying it.. dont... from experience i know its not worth it... ------------------ Happiness is a journey.. not a destination -------823------- |
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