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Teen Poetry #2

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Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

0 posted 1999-12-03 10:46 PM

I can tell you're interested
Just by the look in your eye
But I can't give you an answer
And I can't tell you why

I'm still hooked on him
The boy from my past
I have no idea
How long this love thing could last

And then there's the matter
Of my feelings for you
I can't tell what is fantasy
And what is really true

Beri
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 149

1 posted 1999-12-03 11:29 PM

Conflicting loves????
I know exactly how this feels hon. To be caught up like that is so confusing and painful...good luck!

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

2 posted 1999-12-03 11:40 PM

God, if this poem wasn't written for me.....
I feel im in same situation only onthe other end, i just pray she feels about me how you this person

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

3 posted 1999-12-04 02:49 PM

oh my dear
i know how you feel.. cuz you've expressed it well... great job...

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

4 posted 1999-12-04 07:38 PM

Thanks guys!

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