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Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
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Fredonia, NY USA

0 posted 1999-12-03 12:17 PM


Missing you
My heart aches
I hear your voice calling my name
I look behind
There's no one there
Just the echo of your presence
Disappearing into the silent night

© Copyright 1999 Sarah Goldstein - All Rights Reserved
starboards
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since 1999-10-14
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longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-03 10:22 AM


good!!!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
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Fredonia, NY USA
2 posted 1999-12-03 11:03 AM


Thanx!
Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-12-03 10:24 PM


I like what I've read of your work....its to the point. Nicely done, keep it up!

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~


Singer1981
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Fredonia, NY USA
4 posted 1999-12-04 07:40 PM


thank you! I appreciate that Alwye!!
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