Teen Poetry #2 |
Far Away |
Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Missing you My heart aches I hear your voice calling my name I look behind There's no one there Just the echo of your presence Disappearing into the silent night |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
good!!! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Thanx! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I like what I've read of your work....its to the point. Nicely done, keep it up! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~ |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
thank you! I appreciate that Alwye!! |
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