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Teen Poetry #2

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Bright Melody
Junior Member

since 1999-11-06

Posts 37
O'Fallon Illinois

0 posted 1999-12-03 09:53 PM

You smiled at me
and I was unsure.
Unsure of your feelings,
but more unsure of my own.

I was hurt.
Most didn't understand.
How someone could be in your life only 3 months,
and still leave you broken, 5 months later.

But then there was you.
You began to show me that you beleved in me.
That you wouldn't love me for awhile and then drop me when you got borred.

You tell me what you feel.
You share your hopes, dreams, and reality with me.
You comforted me when I was down.
When I needed help you were there.

You show me everything good,
and help me through everything bad.
I want you to know that I'll always be here,
and that I Love You.

This is my 1st attempt at a poem. I know that the scheme isn't great but I'd appriciate help. I've never taken a poetry class these are just my thoughts.

I was in a relationship earlier that we were very close. Then he broke up with me without a reason. I wrote this for my boyfriend now who has helped me throught alot.

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Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile.

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