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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny 
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poem 1 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Every day i saw those bruises on your back all of your stories u gave now i know the truth no guy should ever do that where do u get the ability to hit your girlfriend, y do u stay with him if he hurts u? maybe IM stupid but u tell me b/c he loves u. what do u mean he loves u? wen i love someone i don't hurt them IM really lost. do u believe what he tells u? IM really lost, IM sorry if i sound like IM rambling later. _______________________ poem 2... Every day i saw those bruises on your back all of your stories u gave now i know the truth no guy should ever do that where do u get the ability to hit your girlfriend, y do u stay with him if he hurts u? maybe IM stupid but u tell me b/c he loves u. what do u mean he loves u? wen i love someone i don't hurt them IM really lost. do u believe what he tells u? IM really lost, IM sorry if i sound like IM rambling later. _________________ poem 3 i like u u dont like me its seems like u might but its to hard to see i open my eyes ur never there but wen everi close them i bring u here here next to me in my arms im holding u tight ,and far from harm i look in ur eyes to see them glow with this feeling i get,u'll never know i jus pray for our lips connet 1 night so i can really go on and hold u tight. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I like the 3rd one, good job ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
ok |
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LEPER New Member
since 1999-11-28
Posts 7 |
HIIISSSSSS #1- it is very cheap to post 3 poems in one post #2- you posted the same thing twice #3- you posted poem 1/2 in a completely seperate post.....hello? is there anyone else out here who sees this? **lurks away** ------------------ REEEK! REEEEEEEEK!! |
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