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it hurts me to watch u hurt
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it hurts me to watch u hurt |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny 
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Every day i saw those bruises on your back all of your stories u gave now i know the truth no guy should ever do that where do u get the ability to hit your girlfriend, y do u stay with him if he hurts u? maybe IM stupid but u tell me b/c he loves u. what do u mean he loves u? wen i love someone i don't hurt them IM really lost. do u believe what he tells u? IM really lost, IM sorry if i sound like IM rambling later. ------------------ I wish i were a poet |
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foxy_16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 31Lake Lillian, MN, USA |
I seriously think you are one of THE best poets I have ever heard! Because even though sometimes people think your work lacks something- i think it's that something that makes a persons' writing theirs. Your poetry has so much meaning and touches me and probably a lot of others deeply. Keep writing like this- you have an extremely awesome talent!! ~Kayla~ Careening through the universe, your axis on a tilt, you're guiltless and free I hope you take a piece of me with you... 'Third Eye Blind' -Motorcycle Drive By- |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
thanx but if u wanna see some good poetry read the song heart shaped box by nirvana...or cray by ozzy ozbourne |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
this poem make me cry |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Mike...this is repost of the 3 poems post. We have rules about multi-posting in the forum and in other forums. This is a warning. Next time I see it happen I will delete one of the posts. I like the message of this piece but I have a hard time with your writing style. Thanks for the read. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I really like your poems, I am sorry you think you need to leave. I don't want u to leave. I always just usually ramble on in some of my poetry, go wit the flow. Live on, write poetry, don't quit cuz of critization. I wish I could say I help people, but I'm helpless to myself. |
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LEPER New Member
since 1999-11-28
Posts 7 |
How cheap is it to reply to yourself, after your the last one who replied to the poem.....? ------------------ REEEK! REEEEEEEEK!! |
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