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Crystal Hudson
Junior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 11
Texas ---- U.S.A

0 posted 1999-12-01 11:38 PM

This is to my boyfriend who forbid me to hang out with a certain group of friends.
boy he thinks he can tell me what's up. I don't think he realilizes how strong a person can be.
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How dare you,
Sit there and be yourself,
But yet forbid the happening
Forces quit around you.

You had one of the
Most perfect flowers in the world,
But yet tell her not to grow
In the middle of her life.

If only you could see
How beautiful she would be,
If you'd step back and
Let her grow as she was.

Your so-called domination
Was destroyed when the flower wilted.
Your life went weak.
Your years grew slow.

Now if you were given
One little wish,
You'd wish for your life to be complete.
Then to your suprise the flower began to bloom

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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

1 posted 1999-12-01 11:40 PM

very nice =)
flower indeed

Crystal Hudson
Junior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 11
Texas ---- U.S.A

2 posted 1999-12-01 11:40 PM

just for anybody, when i said "the most perfect" I wasn't meaning to be consided. Plus I know there is no such thing as "perfect" down here on earth.

just thought i'd let ya'll know!

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

3 posted 1999-12-02 08:13 PM

that was an awesome poem, and all I have to say it YOU GO GIRL!! you know what you want to say and you do. that was an awesome poem and it took alot of talkent to write it. good job!!

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 1999-12-02 09:09 PM

Yes I agre with everyone....lol. Do not klet someone control you. I did that for too many years...and the freedom is wonderful! You are lucky you saw the signs at this point. I was married a year before he started the controling bunk. Pregnant and vows between us...what do you do?

Great job with this piece!

Jeri
New Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 8
Kissimmee, Fl, USA

5 posted 1999-12-03 07:09 AM

thanks for sharing. this reminds me of my bestfriend and what she went through with an ex-boyfriend of hers. needless to say, she grew without him. if only he could understand.

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~Jeri :)

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