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Teen Poetry #2

Love

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 1999-11-30 10:29 PM

I have seen many poems on love here. I thought I would share my view of love with you.

Love is patient.
Love is kind.
Love is gentle.
Love is unselfish.
It is giving.
Complete.
Love isn't petty.
Nor jealous.
Nor angery.
Nor hateful.
It is knowing,
Believing,
And being there.
Always, anytime.
Never inconvient.
Never distant.
Always constant.
Always.......HOME.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-11-30 10:52 PM

Ooh, exactly Marilyn..I too share your views. Wonderful work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

2 posted 1999-11-30 11:02 PM

i beg to differ
you should add one word to every lin
Can
for love can be kind and it can be cruel

and love has been inconvinient for me before
just my thoughts please dont yell at me
*quivering in the corner*

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 1999-12-01 11:26 AM

Alwye....Glad you liked it.

Kevin...I speak of true love my friend. Not infatuation nor of lust. I speak of the kind of love that is real and never leaves. That love is never cruel.

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