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Teen Poetry #2

Need For You

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-11-30 06:45 PM

I need you more than you need me,
easy for everyone to see.
I need you more,
than food or air.
But I cry cause you just arent there.
This need for you,
I cant control,
I gave you my heart,
I gave you my soul.
Sometimes it feels like your too far away,
but in my arms,
I need you to stay.
I love you so much,
and my tears wont subside,
dont u understand?
its killing me inside.
This need for you,
is always there.
I love you honey,
its just not fair.

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

1 posted 1999-11-30 07:03 PM

Love is one way emotion with a two way nessecity if that makes any sense, i know it dosent to me =) ive dabbled over this many times but if there is one thing ive learned everything happens for a reason, if you two can not be together someone better is waiting in the wings =) to dwell on it is an injustice to yourself t just brings hurt

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

2 posted 1999-11-30 11:03 PM

kevin was completly right, I love his insight into this whole thing... wonderful poem :p

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

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