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Teen Poetry #2

Summer Love

ILoveSrfrs
Member

since 1999-11-14

Posts 69
California

0 posted 1999-11-28 03:41 AM

This summer you and I got close
I'm not really sure what for
But then I found out, to you-it was just a summer fling
But to me, it meant so much more

You and I were close
We held hands everywhere we went
Although we weren't really "going out"
It seemed like it because of all the together-time we spent

We spent it at the beach,
splashing in the waves
I could never forget
those sunny fun-filled days

We went to the movies
night after night
It just all seemed so special
It just all seemed so right

Then, you and I- we kissed
And you told me that you liked me alot
It seemed like you and I were meant to be
It didn't require any more thought

We spent the days together
And we were up all night on the phone
There was hardly a time that summer
When you and I were alone

I still can't understand how
come September, the magic disappeared
What I dreaded June through August
It was exactly what I feared

Your feelings for me changed
You were now just my best friend
The loving feeling in your stomach fizzled
That magic all through summer came to an end

This summer, you and I got close
I'm not really sure what for
To you-it was just a summer fling
But to me, it meant so much more

Krut
Junior Member

since 1999-11-26

Posts 27
Adams, Wi U.S.A

1 posted 1999-11-28 03:47 PM

Thats really cool...good use of workds...keep writing...

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~lifes a journey not a destination...~
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Bright Melody
Junior Member

since 1999-11-06

Posts 37
O'Fallon Illinois

2 posted 1999-11-28 04:23 PM

I really liked this. It was great the way you tied the beginning and end. Great job.

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Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile.

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