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comedownking
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since 1999-11-17
Posts 6
U.K

0 posted 1999-11-24 06:35 AM


home
home to clear my head
home to the welcoming sheets
of a blissfully single bed

parents asked me to stop by
said they'd left me my old room
feels strange - like its still mine
I close my eyes and pick a point in time

time
time all on my own
time away from the flat and my friends
and the crowd and the 'phone

told no-one I'd be here tonight
but thats alright
my friends need not worry
I know these streets

streets
streets that flow past like dreams
streets that know my twists and curves
like I know theirs it seems.

© Copyright 1999 comedownking - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-24 05:16 PM


Welcome to Passions. I loved this piece. Very well written. I am looking forward to seeing more of you here.

I would just like to point out that this is an interactive board and your replies to others would be appreciated.

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