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Listen to Me |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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I take the time to listen to what you say Buy your words are empty and meaningless I used loved to listen to you, hear you speak I still here you, but do not understand I wish things went back to the way they were When you spoke and I listened and understood Instead of the nonesense you now speak of Both our minds and souls spoke, but no longer We have slowly drifted and became strangers Only because we do not listen, we only speak Never realizing what we are doing to ouselves Not realizing we shall never be the same As I sit here I realize you are slipping away And if I let this go on, I will lose you Talk to me, tell me your hopes, your fears Do not be afraid to tell me who you are Because I fear I know longer know you I want to listen, and I want to understand But am I able to do those thing for you? If I can, then talk to me, and I will listen If not then I am truly regretting this I think I love you too much for my own good For in the end, I am the one who hurts Will you listen and understand me please? ------------------ ~Susie~ |
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foxy_16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 31Lake Lillian, MN, USA |
This piece is very well put together and expresses what you mean very well!! I like it very much! IT has so much real meaning in it. Keep it up! And i hope whatever you're tryin to find, that you find it. Good luck! ~Kayla~ |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
very heartfelt and expressive you've done a good job describing your feelings... keep up the good work ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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melissaramsour Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 16Aurora, NE |
This is awesome!! I can't even praise it enough! WOW!! So true. It is very meaningful and I am experiencing the exact same thing. The words you used are very powerful. I love this peice and I can't wait to hear more from you!!! *Melissa* |
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comedownking New Member
since 1999-11-17
Posts 6U.K |
excellent piece. its a subject i've tried to tackle before, but i don't think i managed quite as well as you. nice one! *Al* |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Geez, thanks guys. I wrote this while taking those stupid standarized tests. I'm so glad you liked it. I wrote it for my boyfriend since he and I were going through a rough time. Thanks again  ! |
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Krut Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 27Adams, Wi U.S.A |
awesome peice...it reminds me of my mom and i how we dont listen to each other and talk but dont really say nething...i wish she was here right now so i could share this with her... ------------------ *•••~the best way to make a dream come true is to wake up~*••• |
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