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Teen Poetry #2

Back In Time

Erynn Griffin
Junior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 27
San Angelo, TX United States

0 posted 1999-11-20 07:51 PM

Can I go back in time
Before your hand was in mine
or erase the kiss
That I will forever miss
Or forget your eyes
That seem to tantalize

Can my mind erase
The feel of your embrace
How can I forget all of this
And pretend it doesn't exist

I want you to know one thing that will never end...my love for you-I LOVE YOU, my friend

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-11-20 10:02 PM

Sweet, and powerful, done in a nice mixture. I enjoyed this.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-11-20 10:09 PM

Nice work..

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

3 posted 1999-11-21 01:24 PM

this was quite wonderful if i do say so myself

keep up the good work

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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