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lilo/lilg New Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 2w.p.b/FL/west palm beach |
I squeeze you with all my might I’m kissing you tonight Don’t put up a fight Cause I want you tonight The moments we share We don’t have time to spare I wish you were alwayz there But it’s not fair Don’t be in fright It will only be one night Don’t get scared cause I won’t bite That will be tonight It will be the rest of our life Please be my wife Don’t worry its gonna be alright So wait for me tonight |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Welcome to Passions.  I get the impression of you trying to pressure your girlfriend into sex, which is, in one word, wrong! If you truly love her as much as you claim to, you can wait. If your only out for a good time, find another more promiscuous girl. If I have misinterpreted you, I apologize, and ask you to explain what it does mean. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I got the same impression as Systematic Decay did. I believe it is because of this line. Don’t put up a fight Cause I want you tonight I understand the hormones of a teenager but no means no, my friend. Respect is everything in a relationship. Respect for yourself and your partner. I think you have a great way to express your feelings here in poetry. If you would like some help polishing up, I would glady help you. Let me know am I will e-mail you. I do not have my e-mail posted right now because it will change shortly. |
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