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The blurry figure of the spring
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The blurry figure of the spring |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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A link to link was slowly clinging I was beginning to submerse I fell in love and kept on falling The time was crawling in reverse The fall has blessed me with a curse It planted verses in my chest My soul—enthralled began to sink I was obsessed and couldn’t think Not knowing what the day might bring I welcomed winter... Without a rest, I swayed and lingered, While being banded to my nest I saw a road, and yet I hindered Anticipating in a worry The blurry figure of the spring |
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lace New Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 4maryland |
great poem,i loved it! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I am always intranced with your poetry Master. Another wonderful work. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
THank you both! |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I don't know if my interpretation is right, but if it is, I can relate very well. A person has so much to deal with, so (s)he welcomes the cold numbness (winter). (S)he stays in the winter so long, (s)he becomes fearful of feelings (spring) I really liked this one....good work. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Angela16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37USA |
I really liked that! Great job! ------------------ Angela |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks everyone! SysD, your interpretation was nearly perfect. Actually it was about a person who felt in love with the fall (could be a metaphor for almost anything). The fall became his/her home (her nest) and now the person faces winter and the desicion whether to choose the road for warmer weather or the nest and face winter... And all while waiting for the spring! |
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