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Life is a beautiful thing...most of the time
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Life is a beautiful thing...most of the time |
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Litzie Junior Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 12 |
Life, to me, is a beautiful thing ...most of the time. Then, sometimes, it sucks Most days I walk by the windows and look up at the sky and hope to see bright blue and even if I don’t, I smile, cuz the sky is beautiful, with or without the blue Then some days, I walk by the window And look up at the sky And it doesn’t matter to me what it looks like Life, for whatever reason, is not beautiful to me at all Then I will cry, or complain or bring others downs by being deppressed but what I do doesn’t matter that much to me I’m too wrapped up in my own problems to care Eventually I’ll come out of it and feel better, and see beautiful skyies again Today has been one of those days But I haven’t come to the “eventually” part yet |
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Litzie Junior Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 12 |
I'd really appreciate some feedback on this one please! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I am sorry that you are feeling blue Litzie. Some times it takes more then just a day to shake off the blues. hang in there, it will get better. |
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