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Teen Poetry #2

never move on

Peter Hang
New Member

since 1999-11-12

Posts 7
Alma MI, USA

0 posted 1999-11-17 08:36 PM

Whatever did happen to us
How could you ever leave me in the dust
I was willing to give you my love and trust
Because no matter what I must
Fail no more in your love
Hoping that I could rise above
My heart of blood leaves a long trail
The new wind will never find my sail
I will never move on
Until the day we are both gone
This is a very long time
Is fully loving me such a crime
What is so wrong
Must i sing the sad song
In the midst of your love
That you say should not be mine
I sit and I cry
To know that i try
And give it my all
For the only thing i'll ever need
Hoping that I'll succeed
knowing that I should fail
I'll never give up
I will always pursue
Hoping that you will always know
That there will be no end, so
I will always love you

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-17 10:14 PM

This poem is very sweet, it tugs at the heartstrings....

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

2 posted 1999-11-18 12:42 PM

That's very sweet! That's what love does to you tho, huh?! Willing to do anything...
very nice poem, I like it!
April

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...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant,
And there it goes, I think I found my best friend...

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 1999-11-18 05:03 PM

This is a beautiful poem. I can relate to the doing anything for love, anything that does not violate my personal believes. There is a time when you have to let go for your own welfare, even if you do not want to, when love is not returned.

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