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The Light of My Life
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The Light of My Life |
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Laura Mitchell Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76Cincinnati OH,45238 |
I'm going to use this for school. Can you help me out with it? Thanks, Laura Everyone needs a role model to guide you along, and to help you know what's right and wrong. You need someone to inspire you, and to help you know what to do. I am extremely lucky to have the role model that I do. She lifts my spirit up when it's down in the blues. She helped to find who I am, which can hold people up like a traffic jam. She's taught me to follow my dreams, and that they aren't as far off as they may seem. She's like an angel watching over me, making sure I'm being everything that I can possibably be. She's lighted up my life in more ways than just one. To me, she appears as bright as the sun. I thank you for every helping hand you've had to lend, but mainly just for being my really good friend. [This message has been edited by Laura Mitchell (edited 11-12-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
well, I could help you if you are willing to reconfigure the entire poem.......email me, with the poem pasted in it, and I will help. Because I'll tell you the truth.....it really needs work. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Laura Mitchell Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76Cincinnati OH,45238 |
Thanks anyway, but I think I'm just going to do it myself this time. I like how it sounds in a whole, and I'm not sure if I want major changes. |
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