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Teen Poetry #2

Wonderland

eagle
Junior Member

since 1999-10-20

Posts 39
singapore

0 posted 1999-11-11 08:12 AM

Wonderland

I really, really can't write anymore
I can't express my feelings, unlike before
Its a new experience, this thing called love
So give me a pinch, a push and a shove
To see and to find out if this is a dream
Is the velvet sky really what it may seem

And when i wake up from my sleep tonight
If the thick myst still beholds my sight
I'll go back to sleep, to my own wonderland
Filled with butterflies and golden brown sand
With a certain feeling in the blue skies
For you reflect my love in your young eyes.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-11 09:01 PM

Really nice imagery in this one.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

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