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Teen Poetry #2

My Spanish Love

JennyeMeshan
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-06-09 08:57 PM

Your words make my heart pound,
In a rhythm never found,
You are so sweet and tender,
You make my body surrender,
I have never seen your face,
Or ever felt your loving embrace,
Everything is changing,
For my spainish love.

I dream of you at night,
Where love feels so right,
You make my pain go away,
With the words you say,
What did I do to get?,
Have we ever met?,
What progress we're making,
For my spanish love.

The suspense is killing me,
Is there a chance we are meant to be?,
Time will tell but I'm impatient,
For me a brand new sensation,
I want to go where you've been,
I want to see what you've seen,
This, A strong feeling,
For my spanish love.

~JeNnYeMeShAn

This poem is about a guy I know named Rommeo who is a total romantic and he has proven it to me by the sweet words he speaks to me. I thought I'd give him something back.

"If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

Novacaine For The Soul
Member

since 2000-05-26

Posts 122
New Orleans

1 posted 2000-06-09 11:14 PM

dear jennye:
i'm actually quite impressed by the first stanza of this poem... i think you're showing your true poetic talent here... it seems that you traded smooth verse for statement in the last two stanzas though... keep up the good work and i'll keep an eye out for your future poems...

sincerely,
a sad tomato

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-11-15 07:09 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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