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LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

0 posted 2000-06-08 02:07 PM

SING

When I sing my soul Feels free
Like i am flying
High above a tree

I have been told i was Good
Been Told that i could

But where they true
I think so
For I am LOU

And For Every shall I SING! :>

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

PinkANGEL
New Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 2

1 posted 2000-06-08 02:30 PM

Lou I really like your poems they never put n e one down

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

2 posted 2000-06-08 04:49 PM

Thanx PInk ANgel I try not to everone is special and i try to express that in my poems :> Well most of em

LOU

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

3 posted 2000-06-09 04:00 PM

I like this poem, it is simple but it says alot about your personallity I'd say. A person that sees the good in everything and everyone!

Nice poem

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

4 posted 2000-06-09 04:59 PM

Thanx tears I really think that was what i was trying to do with this poem!
LOVE LOU

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

zeke
New Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 3

5 posted 2000-06-09 10:40 PM

I like your poem a lot. It is easily understandable, but at the same time it expressed your feelings in a powerful way.
Keep writing

JennyeMeshan
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

6 posted 2000-06-10 04:47 PM

hey you,
When I sing I feel pretty much the same way. Very nice poem and have a great day!
~JeNnYeMeShAn

"If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

7 posted 2000-06-15 03:18 PM

Thanx Jenny
I guess singers feel that way!

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

8 posted 2000-06-27 11:38 AM

thanx zeke this poem was fun to write!
LOU

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-11-15 07:29 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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