|Teen Poetry #2|
|One Young Boy (not about me)|
since 2000-06-01Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
One Young Boy
A marvelous ray of light
stretched across the plain.
Revealing all but any life;
darkness has been slain.
A veiw of this a young boy saw.
He felt so very new.
But what he saw, what was that?
That young boy had no clue.
He though for now he need not know
what that bright ray meant.
He knew he cherished it in his soul,
but he knew not what it sent.
Its power erupted every feeling
that one young boy could feel.
It's bass was so great in his heart...
proving it was real.
Stone he threw to make a hole
to see the world he knew.
He missed the dark and real world,
but he love this Heaven too.
Heaven now this young boy found,
not seeing any pain.
He can't go back, for if he did,
what now could he gain?
He sees now he must hav died.
So great he felt no fright.
Now he's Home at long, long last.
He's living in the light.
Jeremy D. Halstead '97
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since 2000-04-09Posts 491
That was beautiful and I can relate it when I was young. I founf something and I feel it even now.
since 2000-06-04Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA
not too bad, kinda puts goin to heaven in a new light
ive always thought of heaven as a place that, no matter what u had in ur former life, this was much better, but now that i think about it, if you have love in life, then what will there be in death to better that?
always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:)
since 2000-05-31Posts 932
Jeremy~nice work! Are you sure this isn't about you?? lol j/k! I love the way you put things "He knew he cherished it in his soul,
but he knew not what it sent."nice work!very impressive I must say! Keep posting 'em! =0) Love ya Always~*~Jessica~*~
p.s.~CLB~maybe...love with out pain or heartbreak...? just a shot in the dark. =0)
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