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Brom Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 16 |
Maze The way to your heart is a maze I think I'm lost forever. When I look into your eyes, I'm in a daze You are the perfect lover. Do you know the feeling when two are in love? I don't; I was always the only one Who loved; but adored by no one. So I don't know the feeling when two are in love! The feeling of love is a maze I am the perfect lover. I was adored by no one, I'm in a daze You are lost forever. Ways of love are strange I think I am too. Your beauty is out of my range But I still admire you. Do you know the feeling when two are in love? I don't; my love is unanswered Anyway, about me no one cared. So I don't know the feeling when two are in love! The feeling of love is strange I think your beauty is too. I am out of my range But will always admire you |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Brom Thats beautiful. I too feel the same way. I had my love very close but I chose to admire it in a distance. I feel longing now. Sincerely A_L |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
BROM~beautifully written!! your analogies and metaphors make it just right!!!! =0) Love Always~Jessica~ p.s.I live with an alien!!! =0) LoL |
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