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Teen Poetry #2

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hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-06-05 10:46 PM

Here's a bit of an interesting poem i just shot off the top of my head. Tell me what ya think about it if your bored.

Fell on the ground, I think I.
Tore my heart into, I think you.
Want to hurt him bad, I think I.
Want me to go away, I think you.
Felt my heart break, I think I
You taught me well, I thank you.

6-5-00

There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

1 posted 2000-06-06 02:13 AM

Actually I thought how it was pretty interesting how after all that you thank her. Great poem, neat way to set it up.

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-06-07 05:50 PM

well, let's say it's very interesting. At first I was confused...but then, I thought about it and it made sense. great writing! keep 'em comin off the top of your head!!!=0) Love 2 Love ya ~*~Jessica~*~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-15 07:05 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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