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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
let me count the ways that used to make me think that i was falling in love with you, then let me know i already fell. the way you talked the way your voice slightly went up when you got excited the way you locked your jaw in church b/c you were trying so hard not to hear anything the way you were searching for someone, or something to fill whatever was so empty inside of you, but never admited that you needed anyone! the way you smiled at me every time i did or said something naive or stupid the way you made me feel weak in the knees just by holding my hand the way you taught me how to have fun!! the way you looked when you didn't think anyone else was looking the way you looked at me the way the way your hands felt when you were nervous the way you treated me like i might be beautiful the way you kissed me just the way you held me all of these things made me love you all of these things let me let you go all of these things i'll keep forever all of these things are gone. -- this is the LAST poem that i am going to write about a 'certian someone' i know. (or at least the last one i'll be posting) i think that we are over for good this time - and i think it will all be ok...we are still BEST friends and will always be! and i think i will always love him -- but in a different way, ya know?? <<i think a lot>> well, i am sorry that this was so long, but i thought as long as it was the last one, it might as well be the longest one!! i love you guys and hope some of you respond to this. later PHARON  -- |
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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
Pharon - I know exactly how you feel here. This is a beautifully written poem. Great ending. great work and keep writing! marissa |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I know how you feel and wish I could gget the nerve to say these things to the person who is still partially a part of my life...but broken up for good. But I think I just found that little bottle of courage and will do it. Thanks for the inspiration! I'll keep u posted!! Love YA Lots! Keep up the great writing!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
nice poem pharon seems this person did a lot for you and himself its cool that he made you feel all these things mabey one day ill meet a girl who oes the same things "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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