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Teen Poetry #2

that was then

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

0 posted 2000-06-05 07:24 PM

I Sat there thinking of you
thinking of how for 7 years i have liked you
i always wondered , do you like me too!?!

You caught me when i fell
Your face had looked so pale

When you kissed me oh how red i got
ever since then i have liked you alot!

But now friends we are
Oh we have come so far

Do you like me i like you
i guess i will have to wait and see.

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

1 posted 2000-06-05 08:59 PM

Hey GUys I want you to know the 2nd to the last line should be
I LIke you , do you like me?
I put it backwards!!! This is a true poem tell me what you think!

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

CLBinLOVE
Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

2 posted 2000-06-05 09:09 PM

pretty well written, i like it, it has kinda a leading questioning air about it, like your yearning to hear what he has to say as long as its yes, but i suppose im pointing out the obvious
anyway, i think it was really good

always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:)

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

3 posted 2000-06-06 11:59 AM

thanx Clb I really like hearing what you think PLease read some of my other poems sometime! LOU

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

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