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LIL' Lou
Junior Member
since 2000-06-02
Posts 29
OKlahoma

0 posted 2000-06-05 02:24 PM


I looked at you
you looked at her  
Then you called my name"OH LOU!"

I quickly came over
she did too.

Than he said kindly
I need to talk to YOU

I thought HAHA I won
that was when the hurting had begun.

He said I like her alot
i knew his heart she had caught.

I walked away lonely and sad
soon though it turned to glad

He soon came over and said the one i like is you


That was then and this is now
does he love me i shall soon find out.
  


 Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

© Copyright 2000 Lauren LOU - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-05 02:43 PM


Hi LIL' Lou
You've to be patient and careful.

Sincerely
A_L

LIL' Lou
Junior Member
since 2000-06-02
Posts 29
OKlahoma
2 posted 2000-06-05 06:58 PM


Thanx A.L. I know evrything will be fine thanx for your reply!


 Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-06-05 10:23 PM


Lou~ Your heart will tell you the truth, but it will only whisper as you will find, so don't get yourself in a bind! make sure that you're the on ehe wants before you begin your taunts. and just because you won this time doesn't mean that the next time around you'll get tossed the coin. Be careful and make sure he wants you otherwise you're just setting yourself up for heart ache! Good Luck! I hope it all works out!! =0) Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~
LIL' Lou
Junior Member
since 2000-06-02
Posts 29
OKlahoma
4 posted 2000-06-06 12:02 PM


Jessica
Thanx for your advice i will use it carefully and dont worry i will keep everyone ^ to date !!!! Love LOU


 Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

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