my idea - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #2

my idea

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

0 posted 2000-06-05 07:12 PM

Well when i think of a friend i think of
Knowing you'll always be there
Knowing you have feelings to share

Haveing a shoulder to cry on
any day from the break of dawn.

I could tell you anything
no matter how harsh

Feeling love when i am with you
Knowing that you know what i am thinking.

This is what i think of when i think of you:>

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-06-05 07:16 PM

Nice writing!

[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 06-05-2000).]

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-06-05 07:16 PM

Cute! love the way you talk about this person so sweetly! I know how you feel! My best friend is my girl for life...she has all these qualities you've listed and more! Hope you guys are friends forver!!! Keep up the good writing! Love Always~*~Jessica Lynn~*~

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

3 posted 2000-06-05 08:54 PM

Thanx I really enjoyed writing this and i am glad you enjoyed reading it
LUV LoU

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

4 posted 2000-06-07 03:03 PM

Hi everyone This Is about my BF And i want to know what yall think of it!!!

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.