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Teen Poetry #2

What i think about when i see you

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

0 posted 2000-06-04 07:26 PM

WHen I saw you
that was when i new
just how much i cared for you.

Even though we are just friends
Should i tell you , well it depends
Do you like her
You did In September

I like you
Do you Like me
well I guess we have to wait and see.

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-06-04 07:29 PM

Short, sweet, but to the point! I love it! Kepp writing I'll look for more of your work! try to check out mine if you get the chance!! Live Life to it's fullest and tell this person how you feel! Just don't sacrifice your friendship with false hope. Good Luck!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

2 posted 2000-06-05 02:06 PM

Thanx Jessica! I really like reading what people think of my poems. Everything i write is most likely what i am really feeling!!! LUV LOU

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

3 posted 2000-06-05 02:21 PM

HI LIL' Lou,
THats a nice li'l poem. I guess it's triple haiku!!!

Sincerely
A_L

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

4 posted 2000-06-05 07:00 PM

Thanx A.L I love to hear what you think about my poems! I am in the writing mood i guess! LOL

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

5 posted 2000-06-06 12:09 PM

Hi its me again I just wanna say that this is my first poem and its also my favorite!
What do you think?

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

6 posted 2000-06-06 12:22 PM

Hi LIL LOU
Its simple and precise.

Sincerely
A_L

CLBinLOVE
Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

7 posted 2000-06-06 05:09 PM

well, its short, so i cant say much about it(whether thats a good thing or not...) it was well written, with just the right ammount of feeling
hehe wow that was short

LIL' Lou
Junior Member

since 2000-06-02

Posts 29
OKlahoma

8 posted 2000-06-07 02:59 PM

Thanx Clb!
I am Not 4 sure about what you said I am hopin it meant the poem was good!!!
LOU

Love is like a rainbow,
Each color has a differnt meaning.
Lauren Lou

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