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since 2000-06-04
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2000-06-04 10:11 PM

Hi, first, i guess i better introduce myself
im 15, in 9th grade at Hilton Head High School
ive always loved to write to get my feelings out
and... i guess thats it, heres my poem, i wrote it one nite when i had gotten offline with my girlfriend and i couldnt wait to see her again:
I feel that you
Are the angel of my dreams
And how you have changed my life
You will never know, it seems

Because there is always more
More love than I can show
Yet to you, well I think that you see
Maybe, maybe, just how much you mean to me

In the end, when this life is over
And I have seen all that has been
I will look for you, my angel
To take me to heaven

Every day I am with you
And even some that I am not
I think of how lucky I am
And I dwell on that thought

And so if you hear me sigh
And are trying to figure out what’s wrong
Just remember its not what’s wrong
Its what’s right

And when I think about you at night
I think of all that is right
And at the end of the night
It is your picture that is my minds last sight

I will always love you
Never lose you
Always need you
And never forget you

You are my heaven
I love you

© Copyright 2000 Craig Baker - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2000-06-04 10:19 PM

How ironic, I was just about to write a poem up here called "I'm In Love".  It's not meant as any competition for you or anything, so I hope you don't should read mine too....although I honestly like yours better.  keep it up.

Jeremy Halstead


since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
2 posted 2000-06-04 10:50 PM

This is so sweet. Again your girl is lucky.
Hope to see more poems soon. And Welcome to Passions.


 "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."

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