Teen Poetry #2 |
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im in love |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
Hi, first, i guess i better introduce myself im 15, in 9th grade at Hilton Head High School ive always loved to write to get my feelings out and... i guess thats it, heres my poem, i wrote it one nite when i had gotten offline with my girlfriend and i couldnt wait to see her again: I feel that you Are the angel of my dreams And how you have changed my life You will never know, it seems Because there is always more More love than I can show Yet to you, well I think that you see Maybe, maybe, just how much you mean to me In the end, when this life is over And I have seen all that has been I will look for you, my angel To take me to heaven Every day I am with you And even some that I am not I think of how lucky I am And I dwell on that thought And so if you hear me sigh And are trying to figure out what’s wrong Just remember its not what’s wrong Its what’s right And when I think about you at night I think of all that is right And at the end of the night It is your picture that is my minds last sight I will always love you Never lose you Always need you And never forget you You are my heaven I love you |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
How ironic, I was just about to write a poem up here called "I'm In Love". It's not meant as any competition for you or anything, so I hope you don't mind...you should read mine too....although I honestly like yours better. keep it up. Jeremy Halstead |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This is so sweet. Again your girl is lucky. Hope to see more poems soon. And Welcome to Passions. Isa ![]() "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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