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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Hey guys!! My computer crashed that's why I haven't been on in a while...I missed you guys = ) Anyway...here's a poem for you guys to read...and tell me what you think. Is it? What is it about you that makes me feel this way? Is it the way you smile, The way your blue eyes sparkle, Or just that you're always there? Is it the way you speak to me, The way you hold me, Or kiss me? Is it the way you're near me, yet you're not, The way you treat me, Of love me? Is it the way you listen to me, The way you need me, Or comfort me? Is it just you, yourself that makes me feel this way? That makes me need you, And love you. It is you that I love, And only you that I will forever love. I wrote this after me and my ex-boyfriend broke up. Now we're back together so it's all good  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
Hey I loved this poem. It was really sweet and I felt what you are were going through. I'm glad everything worked out for you two. Please look at and critiqe my work. Keep writing, great job! |
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