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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Blind Love The dry air of summer's night, the dimly moonlight street. Gentle joys of vulnerable hearts in need of passions heat. The hearts of gold in desparate search... my heart is of that kind... needing air of summer's night- always beating blind. Wasted kisses on all of those who came to no avail. Their love was wrong n leaving me upon the midnight hail. I search again in no direction, bling to where i go. Stopping not to see true love, for that I do not know. Jeremy D. Halstead Keep in mind, I wrote this 3 years ago, I was barely 17... I learned a bunch since then. Love ya'll. |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
You were a good poet. From the poems I have read so far i can't wait till you post some more. Good job. Luv, Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremy~ I was looking at all the stuff on the past couple of weeks board and I saw that I didn't read this one. Sorry about that! very well written! I like the way you tie your self into it all! Keep posting! Love Always~*~Jessica Lynn~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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