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poe_32
Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-06-04 02:08 AM

Every little thing that you do
makes me a better person inside
you bring all the joy to my life

Your hands feel for me
your eyes see what I can't see
you speak the words that I cannot say

You are the missing link to who I'am
you are everything I wish I could be
you complete me in every way

I could never part with you
you are like my soul mate
not in love but in friendship

You catch me before I fall
help me through my sadness
make me smile when I cry

No matter how sad or frustrated I'am
a simple hug from you
makes it all better

I can't describe what it is about you
your just really special to me
and thats how you complete me so.

ILoveSrfrs
Member

since 1999-11-14

Posts 69
California

1 posted 2000-06-04 02:57 AM

Hey, I liked this. It reminded me of my best friend (whose a guy) - keep up this great work, you expressed your feelings really well!

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2000-06-04 10:50 AM

It's always wonderful to find someone like this, who completes you. Don't ever let them go. Good writing.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Matchstick McGee
Junior Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 26
Austin, Texas

3 posted 2000-06-04 11:57 AM

I used to have a friend like that but he moved away, I never got his address or saw him again. I really like this poem, and I thikn I'll keep it (with copyright stuff, of course).

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

4 posted 2000-06-05 02:05 AM

Hey, hang onto that person for dear life. Take my advice, if this person is of the opposite sex... don't get involed like that, there's a good chance it could ruin what you hav in time. The stakes just seem kinda high by the depth i felt in your poem. I hope you two stay this close forever.

Jeremy Halstead

poe_32
Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

5 posted 2000-06-05 05:27 PM

Wow, thanks guys for your reply's. I'm really glad you all liked it. It actually is for someone who is of the same sex as me, which is a girl, and she's my best friend of course.And you can keep a copy of it Matchstick as long as you do keep the copyright of it. Once again, thanks for your reply's. smiles

poe

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