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Waiting For You
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Waiting For You |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
<div align="Center"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Arial, Verdana" color="#000080" size="2">Waiting for you The days go by without you The longing still inside The wanting and needing to be with you The feelings I can't hide I found a love so true I found a love so dear I let it go without knowing I let it go with no fear Now that you have found someone new Now that you have moved on I realize how much I care for you I realize how my love for you has not yet gone You hold her in your arms You whisper in her ear You watch me from the shadows You see me cry yet another tear I sit here and think of you I sit here and dream I wish that you would come back to me I wish that you would once again make my heart gleam Now that you know how I feel Now that you know my love is so true I will be here caring and loving.... I will be here waiting for you </font></div> [This message has been edited by Secsyy lil angel (edited 05-30-2000).] |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
I would just like to tell everyone that i wrote this poem for a x-boy friend of mine. I was going to give it to him, but im not sure, any input you have i would really appreciate. Thank you! |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Hi. This is a really good poem. As for advice...if you really want to go for it, you never know what can happen until you try...and if you really love him remember "if it's meant to be, it'll all work out" - luv ya - Danielle  "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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mickel2995 Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48 |
GO FOR IT!! I did the thing you are debating on and it win him back, you are at a no loss situation, all you can do is win from here, go for it hun, and let me know what happens!!! Best of luck, Micale!!! |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
Wonderful poem! I can totaly relate to the feeling. Anyways, go for it. Give it to your ex boyfriend, even if it dosnt change anything, at least he will know how you feel. Overall i loved the poem. |
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jenleslie Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 16USA |
give it to him. that's exactly how i felt and sometimes still feel about my ex-boyfriend and i wish i would have told him. what do you have to lose!?! A broken bone can heal, but the wound a word opens can fester forever. ~Jessamyn West |
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babygyrl126 New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3 |
yeah well awesome poem, that's really good, I think you should definately give it to him. Good luck. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I love your poem! I know EXACTLY how you feel. You definately should give it to him! If it doesn't work out, at least he will understand how you feel. Who knows, maybe you will change his mind after telling him how you feel...I mean, maybe he didn't know you felt this way and maybe thought that you felt the opposite!! There is nothing to lose all it can do is tell him how you truly feel!! BEST OF LUCK!!! ~*~Jessica~*~ |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
Thank you everyone for all your encouragement. I did give him the poem, actually i read it to him so it had more of an effect. He told me that he still cares about me a lot, and we are going to meet up this weekend! Thank you again!! ~*~*Kia*~*~ ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~ *~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~* |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Very well written. I want to congradulate you on your courage to read him the poem. Good luck! Isa P.S. For future references please don't make so many posts in one day. Some of us don't have the time to read them all and i know i would like to read them all. Thanks "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
i'm kinda new here...you will usually find me at Open Poetry somewhere. Secsyy let me give you my input...I'm 21 years old, I've loved, I've cried, and laughed. The only thing you will have at the end is your pride! Do you think that this guy is worth you crying over? I thought the same way you did once...but you know what...no one is as special as you are...sure you can give him the poem. But think of it this way...is he back with you because he loves you?..or because of the extra time you put into it to get him back? this is all i have to say: "if love was a dove...set it free, if it comes back it was meant to be. If it doesn't then it was never yours to begin with" I hope that in no way did i offend you, just wanted to share some thoughts with you...if you need to talk to someone my email is open for you. loves and kisses...but most of all...luck! miriam miriam coronado |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Seccsy.. That was a sweet one. I loved it. Hope your ex-boy friend knows how much you love. Friends are hard to find and your friend will know it too. Sincerely A_L |
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