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I Thought Yoiu Were my Best Friend
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I Thought Yoiu Were my Best Friend |
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mickel2995 Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48 |
DEDICATED TO MY GIRL FOR LIFE, JESSICA LYNN. BEST FRIENDS IS WHAT WE USED TO BE. YOU'D PICK ME UP IF I WAS DOWN, TURNED MY SMILE INTO A FROWN. WATCHED MY TEARS FALL FROM MY EYE, JUST BECAUSE OF ONE STUPID GUY. WHEN I WAS SCARED YOU'D HOLD MY HAND, WERE ALWAYS THERE ON DEMAND. BEST FRIENDS IS WHAT WE USED TO BE. YOU'D HELP ME WHEN I SKINNED MY KNEE. YOU'D TAKE ALL MY FEARS AWAY, LIKE A BEST FRIEND YOU'D ALWAYS COME PLAY. ALL THE LONG SUMMER NIGHTS WE HAD TOGETHER, AND ALL THE GROUNDINGS WE TOOK IN BAD WEATHER. ALL THE GOOD TIMES, YEAH, AND ALL THE BAD, ARE WE JUST LETTING THEM END, I THOUGHT YOU WERE MY BEST FRIEND. NO MATTER WAHT WAS SAID, WE ALWAYS LAYED TALKING IN MY BED. ALL THOSE TIMES WAITING FOR THAT CALL, WHEN IN THE END IT WAS YOU WHO PICKED ME UP FROM THAT BIG FALL. ALL THE MEMORIES WE HAVE, ARE THE THREE RINGS BECOMING ONE, YOU TELL ME, WE HAD SO MUCH FUN. ARE WE JUST LETTING IT ALL END, I THOUGHT YOU WERE MY BEST FRIEND. ~*~*~ JESS IF YOU READ THIS, I WANT YOU TO KNOW HOW MUCH YOU MEAN TO ME, AND I WNAT THIS TO ALL END, YOUR MY GIRL FOR LIFE AND I LOVE YOU LIKE A SISTER~*~*~ |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
True friendship endures as much pain as love,hope you guys get back together. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
great poem.. yeah, friendship is great, huh? through good & bad.. ya know the drill.. ^_^ nice writing.. hope Jessica gets to read it.. Lynne |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Micale~ You are my girl! I love you with all my heart, things are complicated very much so and here we go again on this long desolate journey with the twists and turns of questioning how things will come out. No matter what I want you to know that I love you with all my heart and no matter what I always will! Chris is not going to out us through what Nick has. I love him but I can't risk losing you. I'll take care of Chris and "our" situation. Please just give me time to get it all straightened out, you know how much I love him. But no matter what I will always love you more because you are my SISTER for LIFE!!! I LOVE YOU!!! Love Always~ Jessica Lynn |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey man, that poem's pretty deep. It doesn't have a ton of elegant wording or vocab (which isn't a neccesity is poetry), but you clearly translate your feelings into words and that's what's important...good job..hope Jessica gets the point. |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I would have to agree this poem is pretty deep. I think Jessica has gotten your point. Friendship is a vaulable thing. Isa "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Oh where oh where do I begin?!?! Chris didn't come between us! Nick did. Now that we don't even talk any more because he lives with you I don't know how to be me. I am so lost with out you girl! I don't see you any more and all those memories haunt me every day. This hurts me so much right now you don't understand.I miss you girl,it seems like everything is falling apart and our friendship is slowly withering away. I guess that's what happens when boys come between best friends. NO matter what my girl, just remember that I love you more than anything and I am always here!!! ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
good work on this piece. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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