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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... 
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Alone. No one to comfort no one to share, The undying pain which I have to bare. Building up slowly the discomfort and rage, Like an animal trapped, bared up in a cage. Burning inside with uncontrollable hate, Surrendering unwillingly to my pre-decided fate. Dying resentfully reseeding to light, Fading away from the cruel hurtful night. |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
This is such a sad poem. I know exactly the pain it is describing. It hurts so much to be alone. I like how you rhymed and it flowed really well. I hope to read more. Tara |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
That is such a great poem. It's sad, but I know how you feel. *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is very good writing. The expression is pretty powerful. Well done AngelShell |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Alone, no! You are not that lucky, you're stuck with me! ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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