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hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-05-29 01:25 PM

Ode
To hear the waves crashing at your feet
And see the breeze blow your hair aside.
To reveal the delecate perfection beneith,
For the sun to softly caress your silhouette
As I hold you carefully with mine own eyes .
I pray one day you'll take a second glance;
Maybe then the story will be complete,
So we can finish our first last dance
---Written by:Hoppy

5-25-00

There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

1 posted 2000-05-29 07:03 PM

Please excuse me while i readjust my jaw, its seems to have dropped to a reather...uncomfortible postion...

That was sheer beauty!!! I can't really say anything but WOW!!! That blew me away. Good work!

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Spreading insanity, one post at a time

Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

2 posted 2000-05-29 11:24 PM

I do have to agree that was a very beautiful poem. Wow you have a great talent. Keep it up.

Isa

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-05-30 08:04 PM

This is so good! I agree w/ everyone that you are a fantastic writer and a very emotional poet. *You are a star in this, my own mind...* <Karma Police>

Ever on the crazy side of things,

*~Meredith~*

It's another world
But it's something more than ordinary
Such a lovely day
And it's nothing more than ordinary living
That you're living
- Lit

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

4 posted 2000-05-30 10:35 PM

thanks for the replies, i didn't think it was that good but i never turn down a complement *L*

There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."

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