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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
mabey if i had waited a little longer mabey if i had never tried our friendship would be stronger and i would have never cried mabey in another time or in another place mabey on a seprate world in deepest space people come before games faces before names but as you say it is to late perhapes its destins perhapes its fate but whatever time throws into our eyes ill forever hold you when you cry "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
never think maybe!!! never have regrets!! friendships are mendable and tears will eventually dry - at least for a while - anyhooser's...good poem! |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
pharon thanks for your rply but dont tell me what to think "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
sorry 'bout that empty -- didn't know i hit a nerve there... |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
Hey, that was a really great poem, i have to say, on some levels i can relate to how you feel. If you wrote this poem out of grife, i hope things get better for you! Best Wishes ~ ~*~*Kia*~*~ |
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